Wednesday, March 4, 2009

cinquain

You can't be too careful

wanted
one troll for bridge
all the carp you can eat
and any children that fall in
no pets

2 comments:

Greg said...

i like this one. the "no pets" line makes the poem.

David Kopaska-Merkel said...

I thought so too. Don't use that form much, but the last short line lets you end with a kick.