Thursday, May 19, 2011

after the tornado 3

I can see clearly
now that the trees are gone
tomatoes will thrive



during the toenado
a hail of pinkies fell
glass in my foot

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

I like the first one a lot for its groovy Jimmy Nashness. And I can see clearly now a tanka forms, lines 4 & 5 as: thrive, thrive/tornado days :-)

Anonymous said...

Oops, meant Johnny Nash.