Sunday, January 7, 2018

010718b



Evolution of a Poem



Jovian werewolves
can’t get no peace
shave twice a day
spend a fortune on razors

straight razors are the thing
careful with that blade
you can auto-bobbitt
with an ill-timed sneeze




this is more concise and more cutting:




straight razors are the thing
but careful with that blade
you can auto-bobbitt
with an ill-timed sneeze
 

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