A lune rengay, perhaps we should call it a lune-gay
under the full moon
at the dance,
challenged, he bristled
the gatecrashers pushed him hard
a wild punch struck his date's face
shredding the white dress
she transformed
who knew they were real
growling was enough
the boys fled
leaving small puddles
the photographs showed two wolves
shreds of fabric in their fur
tangled in morning
venison
on their human tongues
Definition: consists of six stanzas with the following line lengths in syllables:
5-3-5
7-7
5-3-5
5-3-5
7-7
5-3-5
Each three-line stanza should have two lines that are directly connected to one another, separated by a break from the third line, as in traditional haiku. Should have something to do with the moon, or moons, or satellites in the broadest sense. Modeled on the well-known rengay form.
Each three-line stanza should have two lines that are directly connected to one another, separated by a break from the third line, as in traditional haiku. Should have something to do with the moon, or moons, or satellites in the broadest sense. Modeled on the well-known rengay form.
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